Invocation For Baby Shower Would You Please Critique This, Is Is A Suitable Epilogue?

Would you please critique this, is is a suitable epilogue? - invocation for baby shower

In the misty spring morning
They dance on the street
The measures are diffuse and the game is too high
Since this event is
The marriage of Crown Castle only

Turn the Rose Garden
That is all decorated and perfumed
With a touch of serenity and elegance

If you look closely
They are dressed to the nines
Your silk dress sense
He maintains his form
His hat and vest
Elegant and refined, to
At the roundabout, as
Wedding guests arrived

"It was just for the occasion
This statement of the Bride Small
Spirit of calling his mother
The filling with pride
The spirits of the cure full
And no one is denied

As they exchanged their vows in
The Rose Garden was
Dimensions that are not
Seen
Spirtas flows freely from one environment
Born as just the fog
Your baby is now grown up
Stages of life as
The couple chose

Since the marriage was made in the court
The scent of roses drift
Blessed spirits exist
Floating around the couple,
Pat
As they dance as husband and wife,

Legend has it now
Return, these opportunities
When you call their relatives
Invoking the supernatural

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